Σχόλια για το "The excursion"

Ωωωωω Θεέ μου ............ωωωωωωωω Θεέ μου... ωωωω Θεέ μου...

ανέβηκε η συνέχεια, γράφτηκε το επικό φινάλε!!! θα το περιποιηθώ κι εγώ δεόντως το βράδυ όπου θα έχω και το περσικό χαλί μου...

ως τότε Εις το Επανειδήν!!!

Candy turned slowly to look at him. There he was sleeping peacefully. How beautiful he was… He seemed for the first time defenceless. His hair, his closed eyes, everything on him was different. Candy was hypnotized staring at him. His face was so calm… She couldn’t tell if there was a man lying beside her or a child. He was like a little angel…

Candy couldn’t help her eyes from looking at his naked body. No, there was no child lying next to her... There was only a handsome man. A man who didn’t have to be awake to seduce her. Her look travelled from his neck to his strong shoulders and from his shoulders to his muscled arms... His chest followed… Then she looked back at his face. He was so masculine… She slowly started caressing his hair.

Ωωωωω Χριστέ μου φωτιές που μου ανάβεις απόψε... Ωρηηηηηηηηηηή Μαριλούυυυυυυυυυυυυυυυυυυ...
Νερό.......... Θερμοκρασία στους 30...........

Then he approached her a little more. His mouth was so close to her ear. His breath was caressing her neck making her tremble.

Slowly Terry started whispering to her ear.

Δεν βοηθάει κι ο ανεμιστήρας...μήπως να ανοίξω το air-contincion??? Water...some Water please...

“You little Tarzan had better open your beautiful eyes because I know you are not sleeping.”

Candy, surprised as she was, opened her eyes looking directly into his.

"But h..."

"Sssh" he interrupted her slowly touching her lips with his finger.

Σουτ...!! Μη μιλάς , τα λόγια είναι περιττά ...τέτοιες ώρες... Ασε τον άνθρωπο να εκδηλωθεί...

Silence followed. They were both there, still hugged in a way they had never been before. His eyes were so focused on hers. Candy could even listen to the beatings of her heart. Or wasn't it hers? She couldn't really tell, but neither could he. Their heartbeats were perfectly combined in one. Their bodies also seemed like one under the blanket.

Η ώρα της σιωπής... Άντε παιδία έχουμε και δουλιές ...τελείωνετε...

" Oh my God!" she yelled as she was moving away from Terry. Her hands were keeping tightly the blanket trying to cover even her arms.

Σπόιλερ:

Σπόιλερ:

"I... We... were both... under... the..."

"Ντο...ρε...μι...φα...σολ...λα...σι... Σι...λα...σολ...φα...μι...ρε...ντο...." "Α...Β...C...D...F...G..."
Όλες τις νότες και την αλφάβητο θα μάθουμε απόψε... τι καταλαβαίνεις Ταρζάν...

"Blanket! We were both under the blanket!" Candy was quite embarrassed. They slept almost naked and they were so close that they seem to share the blanket which was the only thing covering her body!

Θα αφήσω την σαμπάνια για αργότερα...


"No we were not! At least not much..." Terry was quite dizzy. He knew that a piece of the blanket was on him but that was just because they slept so close!

Ααααα για σε παρακαλώ ...μη μασάς τα λόγια σου ...μη μου το χαλάς...


"My legs were between yours!" Candy hurried to say.

"You put them like this!"

"Why would I do such a thing?!" Her cheeks were burning at the idea. Did she do more such things in her sleep?

"Maybe because you wanted to heat them?!"

"And how come we were so close?"

"You came into my arms freckles! " Terry could with difficulty keep himself from laughing.

"What?!"

"Well... It seemed that you couldn't resist, so..."

"So you opened your arms widely!" Candy yelled annoyingly.

Ααααα...για να σου πω...πολλές ερωτήσεις δεν κάνεις? Εμ..τα 'κανες τσινάς κι από πάνω...τι άνθρωπος είναι τούτη??? Αντί να πει ότι ευχαρηστήθηκε τον ύπνο έχει και παράπονο από πάνω... δεν λες που ο πυρετός έπεσε...

"I think that... we've crossed some borders..." Candy finally said in a serious way that surprised even herself.

Ποια όρια και σύνορα μου τσαμπουνάς χρυσή μου???!!! Ααααα δεν αντέχω με δαύτη απόψε... τα χάπια μου

"Borders..." Terry repeated smiling... "Though it's sad, I am pretty sure that we haven't crossed any... However there are some things you cannot control and I can see that these kind of things frighten you. But what frightens us is not always bad... Now my sweet freckles you can get the little Sister Gray that is hiding in you back to sleep!"

Που την θυμήθηκες κι εσύ τώρα αυτή...?! Αστην εκεί που είναι στην ευχή της Παναγίας...

"Well, let me think... You were ill and I did my best to warm you, well may not my best BEST but..."

ΤΕΡΡΥΥΥΥΥΥΥΥΥΥΥΥΥΥΥ ΓΚΡΆΧΑΜ ΓΚΡΑΝΤΣΕΣΤΕΡ ???????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ΜΗ ΜΑΣΑΣ ΤΑ ΛΌΓΙΑ ΣΟΥ ΠΟΥ ΝΑ ΣΕ ΠΆΡΕΙ !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


"Anyway, I did my best, for the existing circumstances... I behaved as a gentleman! On the other hand when you woke up, I can say that you were secretly staring at me and you were also caressing my hair... You know ladies should not do such things either... But at that moment you didn't give a... You did not care at all anyway! Same was, when you got into my arms in the night! And I am pretty sure that you enjoyed the way we were! But a lady should never admit it... Am i right?"

Αγαπητέ μου να μιλάς μόνο για την χρυσομαλλούσα σου... Αντε υπάρχουν και εξαιρέσεις ώχου...

"Candy..." Terry thought as he was watching her. "Yesterday you were completely surrendered... Maybe the fever was the reason... But maybe you also felt like it... Now you act like it was not you... And damn I'm almost enjoying it! The way your cheeks have blushed, even the way you insist on holding so tightly this blanket! This blanket... "

The memory soon came alive in his mind... For the whole night he was watching her. He didn't want to loose a thing... He wanted to protect her... However she seemed not to really need it. In his arms she seemed so convenient like she was on her bed! He was looking at her trying to understand if she needed something when she suddenly pulled a little the blanket off of her... He cannot forget the way he gasped. He hurried to cover her and held her closer to assure that this would not happen again...

Recalling the memory, he also recalled the time she whispered his name, not only in her sleep but also when she woke up. She didn't really sound shy. He could swear that she was looking at him the same way he was looking at her when she was sleeping. Terry moved his head to look at her. She was still at the same position.

Παρακαλώ? Μήπως έχασα κάτι, μου ξέφυγε κάτι... Κ. συγγραφέα ...κάτι σας λέιπει εδώ , δεν το γράψατε... θα παρακαλούσα να το βάλετε σε σπόιλερ...το κείμενο έχει κενά...

"That's because you went to sit over there" he teased her smiling "Anyway, I was thinking that the way you wear the blanket is like you wear a toga... Just like a greek goddess or like a fairy... I can't really say but it suits you well."

Ωχ... πιασαμε την αρχαία μυθολογία τώρα...κατάλαβα θα ξημερώσουμε...


When he turned around he saw her there wearing her dress, which was unbuttoned. He quickly understood what kind of help she needed. Terry took a deep breath and walked behind her.

οκ κύριος... μια χαρά το πας... πάρε θέση τώρα...

"Yes it is..." his hands started trembling once again. This time, the first button was the most difficult... It was really low. Her bare skin was attracting his eyes. The daylight let him notice once again how beautiful she was... He tried with difficulty to stay focused... The second button wasn't easier either.

Αναθεματισμένα κουμπια!!! Θα πνίξω τον σχεδιαστή που τα έραψε εκεί!!!

His moves were sending shivers down her spine. Her eyes had opened widely, but they weren't really seeing anything- neither the rainbow that was still there. All her senses had focused on his touch. She couldn't control the shakes that were crossing her body.

Her reaction didn't leave him indifferent. He gasped. The third button was even more difficult...

Τελείωνε βρε αγόρι μου...δεν αντέχω άλλο...Αμάν!! Αμάν!!

"Your hands... are cold..." Candy replied with difficulty when he reached for the fifth button.

Ασχετο αλλά... https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5WrgMUXlgMw .... Απλώς έτσι μου ρθε δεν ξέρω γιατί... ?

However, Terry took her hands in his and placed his arms around her, hugging her from behind...

Ανάσες...Ανάσες...Ανάσες... Νερόοοοοοοοοοοοοοοοοοοοοοοοοοοοοο

"What? Am I crossing those borders?" he whispered bringing his face close to her neck.
"You have no fever but you are still shivering... Why?"

Όχι άλλα σύνορα!!!!! ΌΧΙ ...ΌΧΙ...ΌΧΙ!!!!!!!!!


"Look at me." he said making her raise her look. "That's because I want to kiss you..." His honest answer made her heart beat faster.

Πες το ευλογημένε!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Και με έσκασες απόψε... και να σου ο μόνος... Ουφ!!!!!!

Terry slowly raised her face with his hand a little more. Their eyes met for a moment. But soon her look turned to his lips. Those lips were the last thing she saw just before her eyelashes close. Terry could no longer resist. He slowly approached her more when their lips met in a smooth touch.

Θερμοκρασία 35.............


Her head rested on his chest as he slowly started giving little kisses to her lips. Every now and then he would make little pauses as he patiently was waiting her to respond and follow his moves.

Her heart was jumping in her chest. She didn't understand when, but she found herself kissing his lips back, giving him the response he was so long waiting for. He slowly turned her around without leaving her lips and held her the closest he could. No more pauses occurred.

Θερμοκρασία 40...................


All their senses had focused on that kiss. Candy was completely succumbed to him. His lips were playing games with hers in a way she could never imagine. Smoothly his tongue started caressing her lips too. Candy followed him instinctively. Her heartbeats got faster when her tongue mistakenly touched his... So many unknown emotions were overwhelming her heart...

After some seconds Terry took his lips off of hers. She had still her eyes closed when she heard his voice...

Ωωωωω Θεοί... είναι δυνατον να φιλάει τόσο ωραία ??!!!!!

"How do you feel?"

Εμένα μη με ρωτάς... τα 'χω δει όλα... ΌΛΑ!!!!!!!


Terry smiled. His heart was still jumping in his chest. Her lips were so sweet. It was like he had just tasted the sweetest wine. It wasn't necessary for him to drink much, he was already feeling dizzy... She had kissed him back... She loved him as much as he did... Could it get any better?

Ααααχχχχ κακομοίρη μου... μεθυσες κι εσύ...

"Are you shy?" he finally asked her.

Κουφή ερώτηση... Νο 1...


"Do you want to kiss me freckles?" Terry asked her in a teasing tone.

Κουφή ερώτηση ...Νο 2...


His look was so intense at her answer. A smile appeared soon on his lips. He slowly approached her and locked his mouth on hers starting a different, deeper kiss. Candy held him tighter... As their breaths were getting faster, all of their borders seemed to fall.

All this unexpected burst of passion had left no place for thoughts. They loved so much tasting each other that they didn't even notice two curious eyes which were watching them...

***************

Ωωωωω Θεέ μου και τελειωμό δεν έχουμε απόψε... να ρωτήσω τα αστεράκια μήπως παραπέμπουν κάπου άλλου? όχι γιατί αν παραπέμπουν να πάω εκεί στο αλλού να διαβάσω κι εκείνο το κομμάτι που λέιπει από δω... εεε???

"Terry..." Candy murmured between two kisses.

"Mmm..."

Εεεεε??? Τι??? ποιος??? Ααααα σε παρακαλώ ...μη μου το χαλάς....

"I think we are not alone..."

"Hmmmmmmm"

Σε παρακαλώ ...μη μου πεις πάλι ότι η Ελίζα κρύβεται στους θάμνους...δεν θα το αντέξω...

"I hear footsteps!" she insisted, but to no end. Terry didn't want to end that kiss.

"Hmmhmhmmm"

Σταμάτα κι εσύ να μουγγρίζεις βρε... ακούει η κοπέλα δεν ακούς?!

"And Theodore!" Candy yelled as she saw Terry's horse walking towards them.

Βρε καλώς την! Πως από δω χρυσή μου? Καροτάκι?

"She is a strong girl. Do not worry." Terry said approaching the horse "A strong girl with no manners..." he whispered as Theodore had just interrupted something really good!...

Έχεις δίκιο αγαπητέ μου... Κανένας σεβασμός προς την ερωτική πράξη...

"No manners at all...." Terry continued murmuring.

Είπαμε ...ας μην επαναλαμβανόμαστε...εχουμε αφήσει και κάτι στην μέση ...

"Oh.. Of course..." Candy answered "What were we saying?"

Κάτι στη μέση είπα!!!


"Actually we were not speaking." he replied and brought her closer, taking once again her breath away with a kiss!...

Αυτός είσαι...συνέχισε!!!

So the next minutes passed this way... Kissing, resting on the grass and teasing each other as usually... There was no embarrassment in the air and time seemed to run fast... at least until Terry started buttoning the rest of the buttons… He still needed practice!...

Βοηθα Παναγιά...γιατί με βλέπω να αγγίζω 45 σε λίγο...

"It's Annie, Patty and Muk!!!" Candy shouted happily.

"Perfect....." Terry whispered leaving Candy to jump off the horse.

Ακριβώς αγαπητέ μου... Τι να σου πω... Κανένα Ελεος... Αυτές μας έλειπαν τώρα... Ουφ...

"And really personal!" Muk added grinning in a suspicious way.

Ατσα ΜΑΚ βγάζουμε και γλωσσίτσα τώρα ?! Λέγε ρε τι είδες! Τλχστν εσύ δείχνεις να ξέρεις περισσότερα απ'όσα γνωρίζεις!

"A... well..." Candy tried to change the subject. "Wh... what happened with sister Gray? Is she very angry?"

"She doesn't know anything, Candy!" Annie said happily. "She didn't check the rooms yesterday!"

Κι είχα μια σκασίλα... κι έλεγα τι με φαγουρίζει...

"Yes!" Muk smiled "Fortunately she knows neither for the "date", nor for the hair-raising details!!"

"Gooh Gooh!" Candy coughed trying to escape, but Muk did not stop...

"To say nothing about..."

"Stop Muk!!!" Candy interrupted him. "You said many things today! Enough!"

Ει...ψιτ μικρέ πολλά λες και θα σφαχτούμε αγρίως εδώ πέρα να μου το θυμηθείς...

"If I were you I would pray that Sister Gray would not check the rooms either tonight..." Muk said in a mocking tone.

Τώρα τι καταλαβαίνεις ?! Να μπω μέσα στο φικ και να σε πνίξω?! Πως την έχεις δει?

"I heard the conversation you had with Muk!" Terry explained while helping Candy get on the horse.

Και σενα βρε παιδί μου ...δεν σου ξεφεύγει τπτ...τπτ...


"What do you mean? I have to get back to school!"

Δεν μπορώ ...έχω ξενερώσει με δαύτη... με έχει στείλει τελείως...

" Have you?" Terry asked in a teasing tone.

"YES!" She quickly replied, although she wanted so much to do otherwise.

"Then come for lunch..." he insisted.

Μη χάνεις τις ελπίδες σου νεαρέ μου... Αχ...

"Impossible!"

Να θυμηθώ να μπω στο φικ να τσουρουμαδήσω κι εκείνη!


"Maybe for dessert?"

"We'll see..." Candy finally said smiling.

"It's done!" Terry replied giving her a quick kiss on her cheek as a confirmation of their deal.

ΤΕΛΕΙΩΣΕ!!! Ότι λέει ένας Γκράντσεστερ είναι ΝΟΜΟΣ!!! Μίλησε ο ΑΝΤΡΑΣ!

"That's love freckles..." he whispered in her ear.

Ααααααααααααααχχχχχχχχχχχχχχχχχχχχχχχχχχχχ....................................

Μαριλού μου ήταν τόσο όμορφο, υπέροχο, τρυφερό, ρομαντικό !!!!!!!! Θέλω κι άλλο... Κρίμα που τελειώσε περίμένω εκείνο το ελληνικό φικ έτσι? κανόνισε!

"Ντο...ρε...μι...φα...σολ...λα...σι... Σι...λα...σολ...φα...μι...ρε...ντο...." "Α...Β...C...D...F...G..."

Καλά βρε!!! Δεν ντρέπεσαι να μου κοροϊδεύεις την πρωταγωνίστρια?!?! Φτουσου!!! "...H...I...J....K...L...M...N...O....P"

Αγαπητέ μου να μιλάς μόνο για την χρυσομαλλούσα σου... Αντε υπάρχουν και εξαιρέσεις ώχου...

Ναι έπρεπε να μπει ένα αστεράκι, δίκιο έχεις....

Κ. συγγραφέα ...κάτι σας λέιπει εδώ , δεν το γράψατε... θα παρακαλούσα να το βάλετε σε σπόιλερ...το κείμενο έχει κενά...

Βασικά αναφέρομαι στην αρχή που τον χάζευε και νόμιζε ότι και καλά κοιμόταν... Τώρα όσο για το άλλο... Ε ένα hot flash back πάντα είναι καλοδεχούμενο νομίζω.......

Όχι άλλα σύνορα!!!!! ΌΧΙ ...ΌΧΙ...ΌΧΙ!!!!!!!!!

Δεν σε αντέχω άλλοοοοοο!!! Έχω πέσει!!!! Όχι άλλο κάρβουνοοοοοοο!

Θερμοκρασία 35.............

Θερμοκρασία 40...................

Εδώ συγγνώμη αλλά θα μιλήσει κάποιος άλλος για εμένα....

να ρωτήσω τα αστεράκια μήπως παραπέμπουν κάπου άλλου? όχι γιατί αν παραπέμπουν να πάω εκεί στο αλλού να διαβάσω κι εκείνο το κομμάτι που λέιπει από δω... εεε???

Δεν υπάρχειςςςςςςςς!!!!!!!!!!!


Αν θες το αφήνω επάνω σου!!!

Άστο πάνω μου ...ξέρω τον τρόπο , τον επεξεργάζομαι !!!

Βρε καλώς την! Πως από δω χρυσή μου? Καροτάκι?

Έχεις δίκιο αγαπητέ μου... Κανένας σεβασμός προς την ερωτική πράξη...

Κανένας όμως!!!!

Ατσα ΜΑΚ βγάζουμε και γλωσσίτσα τώρα ?! Λέγε ρε τι είδες! Τλχστν εσύ δείχνεις να ξέρεις περισσότερα απ'όσα γνωρίζεις!

Να θυμηθώ να μπω στο φικ να τσουρουμαδήσω κι εκείνη!

Νταλίτσα μου σ'ευχαριστώ πολύ για τα καλά σου λόγια και τα ανεπανάληπτα σχόλια σου!!!!!!!!!!

Κάτω τα χέρια από την πρωταγωνίστρια μόνο γιατί την θέλουμε και για άλλα φικάκια!!! Ο Τέρρυ δηλαδή...

Εκείνο με το pride and prejudise σταθερή αξία!!! Και έλεγα τι μου θυμίζουν τα κρύα χέρια!!!

Άστο πάνω μου ...ξέρω τον τρόπο , τον επεξεργάζομαι !!!

Προσοχή γιατί βλέπει και ο Μακ!!! Mην το ξεχνάμε....

Εκτός αν τον εκτοπίσουμε να κάνει βόλτες με την Theodore......

Είδες...είδες... εμένα εκεί πήγε το μυαλό μου αμέσως με τα κρύα χέρια γι αυτό το βάλα...

Τι λες εκεί??? Μόνο να τον εκτοπίσουμε , εγώ λέω να τον δέσουμε σε ένα δέντρο να μην ακούει βλέπει τίποτα !!! Ακούς ακούς ο ξερόλας...

Τίποτα χρυσή μου...ήταν χαρά μου

μολις το τελειωσα κι εγω! το λατρεψααααααααααα!!!!!!!!!!
εχει δικιο η αριελ.. back to sweet 16!!!
ειναι θεος ειναι κουκλος ειναι τελειος ο Τερρυ!!!!!!!!
υπεροχη σκεψη να εμπλεξεις ελληνικη τραγωδια στις συλλογες..

η σκηνη που την πειραζε μολις ξυπνησαν και τα φιλια....


μαριλου μου το φικακι σου ανεκτιμητο..

&

τα σχολια της νταλιας ανεπαναληπτα!!!!

ειναι θεος ειναι κουκλος ειναι τελειος ο Τερρυ!!!!!!!!

Ναν μου σε ευχαριστώ πάρα πάρα πολύ!!! Πάει κι αυτόοοοοο......
Τώρα που τους έστειλα εκδρομή είμαι πιο ήσυχη πως δεν θα κάνουν βλακείες μετά..... Ωχουουουου.....

Και ναι! Τέρρυ χωρίς πειράγματα δεν γίνεται! Όπως και Ντάλια χωρίς ανεπανάληπτα σχόλια ένα πράγμα....



Τώρα που είπες για φιλιά... Έχω μια απορία λίγο offtopic... Στο μάνγκα πέφτει ένα φιλί και καλά στο μέτωπο.... Στην επόμενή όμως σκηνή η Κάντυ κρατάει τα χείλη της.... Είναι 10000000% στο μέτωπο το φιλί??? Διάβαζα το κόμικ τις προάλλες και ήθελα να σας το ρωτήσω....

οι σελιδες ετσι δειχνουν και στο ελληνικο και στο αγγλικο μανγκα...

Σπόιλερ:

Καλά τίποτα δεν είναι σίγουρο έτσι όπως το βλέπω!!! Μπορεί να έσκυψε κι άλλο.... Και αφού αυτός λέει ότι δεν την "ξεγέλασε".....

Πες τα Μαριλού!!!!!!!!!!

Κι εγω τα ίδια λέω..... σκύβει, που πέφτει....

Λοιπόν αυτό το φικ, με γύρισε πολύ πίσω και θυμήθηκα ενα τραγούδι, μεγάλη επιτυχία, της νιότης μου!

Σπόιλερ:

Precisely!!! Το τραγούδι έχει πέσει μέσα!!!

σκύβει, που πέφτει....

Έλα μου ντε... Που πέφτει οέο??? Πρώτη στάση μέτωπο, δεύτερη στάση μύτη (προσπερνάμε) και κατεβαίνουμε στην τρίτη στάση!!!!!!!........ Σμουτς!!!

Οδηγέ!!! Στην τρίτη στάση θα κατέβω!!!!

Τώρα μου θύμισες άλλο τραγουδάκι......

Ωχ! Διασκευή του ιταλικού!!!! Δεν το είχα ακούσει ποτέ! Θα είναι της δικής σου νεότητας, μάλλον.....

Όχι είναι πολύ παλιό του Θάνου Καλλίρη... Το άκουγε η αδερφή μου που είναι στα 32.... Και την Κάντυ μέσα από την αδερφή μου την έμαθα βασικά...

κι εγω στην τριτη σταση κατεβαινω.

τα τραγουδακια ταξιδευουν προς τα πισω..

Καλλίρη;;;;;; Λογικό τότε! του είπα Stop απο το 87!!!!

Τον φίμωσες τον καημένο!!! Εσύ και η Γερμανού!....

τέλειο, τέλειο, τέλειοοοοοοοοοοοοοοοοοοοοοοοοοο

λατρεύω, προσκυνώ και όλα τα παρεμφερή...

μαριλού μου συγχαρητήρια... είναι τόσο όμορφο, τόσο μαγευτικό, τόσο μα τόσο τρυφερό, τόσο ρομαντικό, τόσο ανανεωτικό, τόσο τέλειο!!!!!!

μακράν η ωραιότερη side-story που έχω διαβάσει

έχω κατενθουσιαστεί ... χαλάλι και η αναμονή ....μπράβο και μπράβο μαριλού μου

Λιμπράκι μουουουουουουουου!!!!!!!!!!!!! Τι όμορφα σχόλια είναι αυτά????
Μη μου λες τέτοια γιατί θα πάρουν τα μυαλά μου αέρα!

Mου έφτιαξες την μέρα πραγματικά!!!


Ο ενθουσιασμός που δείχνεται όλες με απογειώνει!

Να ξαναπώ ότι χαίρομαι που σ'άρεσε?? Ε ναι θα το πω!!! Χαίρομαι πολύυυυυυυυυυυ!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ίσως τώρα που πήραμε φόρα να ακολουθήσουν και άλλα!
Για την ώρα σκέφτομαι να το ανεβάσω στο Candy Terry Forum! :) :) :)